Poem Thread I Told the Stars About You
Summary
In Bangwing IN a member shares the poem I told the stars about you, celebrating imagery, intimacy, and a standout third stanza. The announcement includes a 90% personal rating, notes of chai inspired creativity, a request to extend the third part, and plans to possibly expand it into a story. Community members are invited to read, react, and help develop the piece.
galaxies painted with your story of light,
how you broke shattered into stardust,
how you helped me through the night.
iโll call you mine, watch me when i do,
for even 3 seconds were enough,
to fall in love with you.
and darling,
i know it seems too far from the truth,
but trust me when i say,
i swear i told the stars about you.
Reading ๐๐ป
Inspired by chai โ๏ธ
do you like it
90%
why 90
1 stanza = metaphor
2nd = Raw
3rd = intimacy and tension
I kinda liked the third part a lot
Need extension of that
iโll maybe write a story with that line
itโs so good
thank you for inspiring it
Waiting if you are publishing it on socials
letโs see
