Relic Poem Faded Love and Quiet Silence

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In Bangwing IN this announcement posts Relic, a soft, sad poem about love that faded into silence. It references moon imagery, a tulip turned black rose, the refrain love me love me not, and a line about bro finding a ring but not caring. The community responds with admiration and curiosity about the Urdu term ajnabi, sparking discussion and emotional reaction.

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  • This poem is about love that faded, someone who changed, silence that hurts more than words, and a relationship that once felt cosmic but now feels alien. It’s soft, sad, and poetic—like writing a letter to someone you used to know.

Moon is mine,
but tonight, the moon is blushing—
perhaps she saw her eyes
in the sky’s reflection.

I know you care,
though your silence wears it like perfume.
You used to be tulip,
bright, delicate, full of spring.

Now—a black rose?
Still beautiful, but hiding thorns.

Pick a petal.
“Love me... love me not...”
Each fall whispers doubt,
and still—bro is finding ring,
but he's not so caring.

We were once written in stars,
now we're just ajnabi,
strangers to our own story.

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a beautiful one; love

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what’s ajnabi again?

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“thought your silence wears it like perfume”
i think i fell for this line so hard.

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Stranger
Urdu word

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Did you noticed this poem is inspired by yours

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wait actually?

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which one?

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I dont usually follow this format
Melancholic poetry

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ohhh

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"Dont dont"

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Lol

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Yeah

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huh

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My typo*

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bro i didn’t even see it

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Achha hai fir to 😶‍🌫️

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okay sir 😭

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