Atleast I Held Me Softly

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[ written in an imaged state of mind ]

I smother daffodils between my fingertips,
Forever ignoring the scalding sunrays,
As they lap softly on my burnt skin
(Watch them tremble at the things Iโ€™ve been)

And soon, when dusk paints the sky,
I reach out for another page, another quill,
Another time, I sit by the windowsill
(Watch the day flicker when I write of sin)

Darling, people around me must find it funny,
Oh, how I live like a devil and claim that Iโ€™m a fairy.
(I held you like the darkness; at least I held me softly)

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I FORGOT TO REPLY

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Im too late, you already posted on insta

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hurts ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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  • anyway any thoughts on the poem?

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Words in bracket was the hook ๐Ÿฅ

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