BLOOM Poem Thread Longing Love Liberation

Summary

On Bangwing IN the announcement highlights the BLOOM thread featuring bilingual Hindi and English poem excerpts exploring longing love and self-liberation. The post captures lively community reactions, playful replies, and requests for new perspectives and longer poems. It matters because it sparks creative engagement and encourages members to contribute more writing and interpretations.

Original Post

Khudse khudko chura liya hai aise
Zindagi na milegi firse
Dil bhara nahi dildar se
Phul hai baraste aasmano se jaise

  • English

  • Stole myself away from myself, just like that

  • As if life won’t come around again

  • My heart still hasn’t had its fill of the beloved

  • Like flowers raining down from the skies

— Rachit

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IS THIS A REPLY

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HEY STOP ALEX

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i love flowers and skies together so much ⭐️

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SECOND LAST LINE

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RACHIT WHAT

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😭

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darlin, i doubt the world’s ever going to have enough of your words

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Hindi or English 😶‍🌫️

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:cute_blush:

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Imagine rose

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totally

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english

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Haha

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don’t even dare denying it

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i love it when you write sm ugh

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we need longer poems from you ong

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Fever eating words and its last day i can be online maybe

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Wish we had 48h a day

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real

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and wish we rachit had two brains and four hands

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ahaha

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😂

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A partner

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Imagine poet couples lmao

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ahaha imagine

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that’s why you shouldn’t fall for a poet 🫡

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😭

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hey you didnt deny it

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it means something ofc

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Can't :popcorn:

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ofc

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we’re cool like that

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also

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write this from another perspective

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like

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like someone who doesn’t want to see the flowers rain down

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someone who’s content w life w js you no matter how long

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or js reverse everytbing

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doesnt have to change perspective

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It was about self love & liberation 🤔

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Will be saddest

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ofc

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that’s why

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why let you be happy when i can torture you

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Jo manga tha wo diya nahi ishq ne
Shayad kami thi sirf mujhme
Rakhne ko gaya tha dil
Tut-te hue baras rha hai ye dil

English..
Love never gave what I asked for
Perhaps the flaw was only in me
I went to offer my heart
And now it rains, shattered, piece by piece

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🌚

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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OH MY GOD I DIDNT KNOW HINDI POETRY COULD MAKE ME FALL IN LOVE WHAT 😭

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😭

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RACHIT

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you’re amazing

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Hindi
With what i started writing things lmao

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ofc and i read the hindi here

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:cute_blush:

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Did you understand hindi line

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Like

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Quickly

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hell yea

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i love the शायद कमी थी सिर्फ मुझमें

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next time js type it in hindi

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i’ll get it even faster yk

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Made it saddest as expected

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Yayyy

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yessir

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arigatou rachit

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Hehe ✨

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fr ❤️ ⭐️

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WAIT I DIDNT SEEN THAT

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planning next dare ✍🏻

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you’re welcome, love

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ahahaha be kind please

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U

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hush now

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🐥

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🐦

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