New OC Reveal: Ralty Joins Sonic RP: Enerjak REBORN
Summary
Sonic RP: Enerjak REBORN introduces a brand new original character, Ralty, to the server's expanding universe. This announcement details the character's unique fire magic abilities, combat style, and background lore, distinguishing him from existing archetypes. Community members can now review the full character documentation to see how this addition integrates into the server's ongoing narrative and world-building.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ezFuB2JXkj5ZHdjQUrDsh3xl9nOhnxz5C8H4EV5Ceek/edit?tab=t.0
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I got support for the part with Emily
Ok
Ralty
Yeah it's obvious I some inspiration, It's my first OC tho.
I tried to make his way of thinking and behavior different from Ralsei or Azzy, and the way he use his magic is different from Ralsei, at the exception of the pacify spell which is pretty much the same I admit.
I also took some inspiration from Jojo and JJk also.
I think I won't give him another last name
That's coherent with his background
And I'm terrible with names
Ok
So you don't like him ?
Just wanna know
I took inspiration from Jkk and the zenin for the family thing
tbh
and the fire magic isn't really used like the Dreemurr does
dunno what to change
he isn't really a mobian
but he's close
the pacify could be a syringe
For what's left it cannot really be changed since it would make me write a totally different story and it wouldn't be the character I wanted to create anymore
And the Raly thing is just a Joke
And the war has nothing in common with the one in Undertale
- Fire Magic that mostly resembles what the the dreemurs are capable of doing (I can't change that, without changing the whole story, and I think I modified it well)
~~-Pacify that has no changes compared to the source material~~ (I changed it)
~~-History of war that looks like the war that happened in Undertale~~ (The war has nothing in common with Undertale) - He comes from a race known for powerful fire magic (again like the dreemurs) (Again I can't really change that without changing the whole story)
~~-Doesn't like to be called Raly like Ralsei ~~ I can remove that one if you don't like the joke
what do u think
yeah but I wanna have another point of view
Hmm
Spanish Colonizer ralsei...
Wtf ?
Idk they just
Give off that vibe
This is fine, I’ll approve it
Thanks, tell me when I can start please
Wdym..?
You can rp anytime?? It’s your choice
Made some changes in the doc, if you're ok with them or course.
If you're not I'll just ctrl + z back to before.
I made it red so what changed is more visible
I made it red so what changed is more visible
I made it red so what changed is more visible
I accept it
Thanks
