Need some advice on what to change

I’m lazy. Tell me what needs to change

https://pokepast.es/b6f6d1e9b5c89488

Have been using this team with both trick room and rain as options and it works fairly well but I feel like it is not optimised and would definetely need improvements, a matchup this struggles with is Zard Y if i don't manage to get up trick room. Help please 🙏

This team is fun but I'd love to get some feedback.
Camerupt bullies Charizard and several flying mons. Deals with arch and is pretty safe to switch into.
Torkoal is the main Swampert answer and overall weather control. Also hits like a fucking truck and helps Camerupt heatwave hit harder
Sylveon is the garchomp answer mostly but it two taps incin and can yawn to force switches or nuke options as well. Ntm life orb helping hand fucking hurts
32+ SpA Life Orb Pixilate Sylveon Helping Hand Hyper Voice vs. 0 HP / 0 SpD Multiscale Dragonite: 175-208 (105.4 - 125.3%) -- guaranteed OHKO
Farig is the trickroom setter and helping hand to make sure the three big hitters hit harder with spread damage. Ofc also gives protection from prio.
Sinistcha is the least used and shadow ball is now life dew to keep big hitters alive longer making sure torkoal, sylveon, and M. Camerupt lives longer
Staraptor is literally ONLY THERE to either hit final gambit and murder a problem or make them think it's clicking final gambit and then click cc on something like kingambit or brave bird into opposing sini.

I'm kinda new to vgc (I started playing last year) and wanted some feedback on this team I built
Some people told me to change rhyperior with another mon because it has too many weaknesses, but I don't know with who

https://pokepast.es/b6f6d1e9b5c89488

Have been using this team with trick room rain and it works fairly well but I feel like it is not optimised and would definetely need improvements, a matchup this struggles with is Zard Y if i don't manage to get up trick room. Help please 🙏

I have a weakness with hazards team, so should I replace dragonite with excadrill, or an other one?

What you guys, think about this team. I wonder if I should replace Aegislash by Gholdengo, and Slowking by primarina for a more offensive bulky team.

Found it on YouTube, and I’m interested about this one. Should I change a pokemon in the team? Or moveset, need your help guys, tysm.

Hello, I found a team and I’m interested about this one, is this a good one? Should I change something?

here’s the team

Any mega floette team with two megas😁

I am building a TR sun team, I have 5 Pokemon so far:
https://pokepast.es/013e226f79236b4f
I'm looking for a 6th member of the team that is my 2nd mega that can deal with Mega Charizard Y, Mega Swampert, and Kingambit, as those are the threats I am worried about. If possible, benefits from sun as well. Any thoughts on stats and movesets would be appreciated as well!

I almost never bringing Gholdengo and Sinistcha in matches, and i'm really thinking if i should switch one of them, also i have been struggling A LOT against Trick Room teams. so, i would like to know what i could do with them or the other members of the team

Clarifications:
Not max HP on Grimmsnarl and sinistcha: i've did that so then their HP would be divisble by 4 so then i can get max recover from Hospilaty/Life Dew and use the rest in more defense.

1 HP Pelipper: same reason as GRimmsnarl and Sinistcha, max Hospilaty/Life Dew recovery and then use the rest in defense.

12 Speed Gholdengo: Outspeed most mons in tailwind.

If there is anything you think is odd and i did't talked here, let me know!

https://pokepast.es/39036223df3c3c4a

Have been trying to build around mega mawile but does not feel the best. Liked a team having both trick room and tailwind options and for the other mega option thought maybe tyranitar could work. Team feels somewhat weak like intimidates, screens, fake outs etc. Thought farigaraf would fit well but unsure where it would go. Help would be appreciated 🙏

https://pokepast.es/306e31396b3adc20

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And would you ever use substitute over protect?

Swampert @ Swampertite
Ability: Damp
Adamant Nature
- Wave Crash
- Earthquake
- Smack Down
- Protect

Pelipper @ Damp Rock
Ability: Drizzle
Modest Nature
- Hurricane
- Weather Ball
- Tailwind
- Protect

Tyranitar @ Tyranitarite
Ability: Sand Stream
Adamant Nature
- Protect
- Rock Slide
- Knock Off
- Dragon Dance

Farigiraf @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Armor Tail
Sassy Nature
- Trick Room
- Protect
- Rain Dance
- Psychic

Archaludon @ Leftovers
Ability: Stamina
Modest Nature
- Electro Shot
- Protect
- Flash Cannon
- Dragon Pulse

Grimmsnarl @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Bold Nature
- Reflect
- Light Screen
- Spirit Break
- Parting Shot

It works pretty well but I'm struggling with my other 3 slots constantly trying new things. I lose to the bridge most of the time but the team works well for me. I do need to change TTars EV's to something else though.

1.tailwind setter. Since ttar gets my sash I lose whims alot first turn, and that's my main swampert counter against the rain teams. Pelliper was working good for me with wide guard but bringing 2 weathers is dumb, I was really enjoying talonflame but it makes me lose to rain even faster.

1. Strong water type is very useful in this team when I can't bring garchomp. No one feels like it fights just right though, ghost fish was working ok, have been considering gyrados for intimidate but idk just like using things I can safely earthquake next too.

2. Backup mega. Nothing feels like it works good except last resort Kang, which still gets walled by the bridge. Using zard cause I'm not smart enough to think of a better rain counter, hate being insta killed by rocks tho. Mega floette seemed like a good choice when I can't bring Metagross but I still lose anyway.

Tldr. Help me fight rain and keep my 3 pseudo legendaries.

i want to learn the fundamentals & basics of comp pokémon, i don't know how everything works pretty much, i did try building a team with froslass but i think it lacks something. i also need advices for the mons that i have on my box.

Guess who's back it's me (I like team building) this time with a sceptile team that I'll run yall through

SCEPTILE AND ROTOM
So to start we've got the standard sceptile duo with Mega Sceptile and Rotom (heat this time but I'm open to suggestions to change). I started building with Sceptile because I'm tired of swampert rain teams, and discharge + earth power OHKO's bulky archaludons as well. The First problem I ran into is simple: swift swim swampert out speeds the fastest sceptile in the rain, which is a problem since the average swampert runs Ice Punch as a coverage move

ALTARIA
I was struggling with the swift swim issue and came up with a few hairbrained solutions. my first idea was adding torkoal and a TR mode but I didn't like the way it was shaping the team, the second was replacing thunderbolt on rotom with sunny day, but that felt stupid af since it would force me to hard pivot off rip. and then I remembered Cloud Nine exists, and that's why altaria is here. I've made it bulky and gave it perish song + roost for late game finishes, since I don't intend to use it for damage, it's there just to shut down weather

AERO
the dino is here just for tailwind and wide guard support honestly, I feel like the speed control is needed for the team's second mode. also funny rock slide flinch.

TAUROS
The Bull! Okay this might take some explaining, But I really love the paldean tauros forms in this format, specifically aqua breed. I wanted intimidate but didn't want to add incin since I really didn't want more rock weaknesses. But Tauros fucking rules; water/fighting is good typing, it's got intimidate as well, a signature move that breaks screens, access to aqua jet for priority and mental herb allows it to keep it's good physical bulk even after a close combat, it's here as a late game sweeper and Intimidate pivot mon

METAGROSS
while building I noticed the team has a lot of weaknesses to rock, ice, and fairy. so... yeah Steel Type 👍 Jokes aside Mega-gross is a good addition to any team really as long as you give it the right supporting tools, and I believe tauros and aero provide those tools rather well. originally the team had altaria as it's mega, but that didnt' help with any weaknesses really (except turning rock to neutral) plus mega evolving removes Cloud Nine which is like the whole point of having altaria. so with the need for a steel type, metagross just made sense to have as the secondary mega imo

THE GLARING WEAKNESS
the team really doesn't like Yard. sceptile isn't weak to fire, but that doesn't mean it wants to take Yard weather ball. the current Yard gameplan is just lead aero and rotom and try to obliterate it before it can move

Sceptile @ Sceptilite
Ability: Overgrow
Level: 50
EVs: 2 HP / 32 SpA / 32 Spe
- Giga Drain (the recovery is good with lightning rod boosts)
- Dragon Pulse
- Earth Power
- Detect

Rotom-Heat @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
Level: 50
EVs: 2 HP / 32 SpA / 32 Spe
Timid Nature
- Discharge
- Volt Switch
- Overheat
- Thunderbolt

Altaria @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Cloud Nine
Level: 50
EVs: 32 HP / 14 Def / 20 SpA
Modest Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Roost
- Perish Song
- Protect

Aerodactyl @ Focus Sash
Ability: Unnerve
Level: 50
EVs: 2 HP / 32 Atk / 32 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Rock Slide
- Tailwind
- Wide Guard
- Protect

Tauros-Paldea-Aqua (M) @ Mental Herb
Ability: Intimidate
Level: 50
EVs: 14 HP / 20 Atk / 32 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Raging Bull
- Aqua Jet
- Close Combat
- Protect

Metagross @ Metagrossite
Ability: Clear Body
Level: 50
EVs: 14 HP / 27 Atk / 25 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Meteor Mash
- Psychic Fangs
- Body Press (coverage move, willing to change, maybe bullet punch for prio?)
- Protect

anything I should change? any concerns or feedback? LMK

I saw an ABSURD GCF team, and wanted to use 3 of the mons on the team. What mons would you add to a core of these 3?
https://pokepast.es/7afde5de7d848964

So, im the type of player who tries to make underrated pokémon somehow work, i did it with Mega Chandelure and now i wanted to try it with Mega Victreebel.
I created that team on a whim and played a few rounds with it.
A key problem i noticed is that my offensive pokémon are too frail to keep living loong enough.
Since my games language is in german, ill translate the whole movepool in my second message.
The core idea of that team is to let Mega Victreebel a debuff pokémon for the enemy team,

the team is designated to be played in Doubles Ranked

I am not sure if I need to change anything but pls lmk what I need to fix in this team